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Because
Contributed by
Pats4eva7
on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 05:05:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Just because it doesn't show doesn't mean it isn't there,
Just the same as something hidden still exists.
Just because you don't know,
Doesn't mean I don't feel.
Just because I don't talk,
Doesn't mean I don't think.
Just because my scars are old,
Doesn't mean I don't cut myself up inside.
Just because im not in a coffin,
Doesn't mean I don't feel dead inside.
So next time you look at me,
Look beyond that photo smile on my face;
See my sadness underneath.
Look beyond my clothes and beyong my skin,
I'm not the person I may seem.
The true me is hidden inside.
Copyright ©
Pats4eva7
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2005-03-29 17:05:02]
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Re: Because
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by NightOwl on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 05:45:39 PM AEST
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I can really relate to this... it is an amazing expression of inner thought. Keep writing, it is a great way to heal. Don't give up!! You have a lot of talent.
*~Erin~* |
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Re: Because
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by all_that_i_can_be on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 03:09:31 PM AEST
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| its interesting how much that captures the esscence of my feelings as well. its an easy piece to relate to, an amazing one all together. |
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Re: Because
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by Urizen on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 06:28:20 PM AEST
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| I liked this poem alot, it contained some very strong emotions, very well written I thought. |
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