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Back To The Streets
Contributed by
THUGGIN4REAL
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Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 04:56:54 PM in AEST
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Living in the dark isn't so hard , the odds are still against me , so I'll continue to play my cards.
Waking up in the morning with this x on my back , I've worked to hard to get where am at , so you can back off , cause playa , I don't need your slack.
Trust was broken , how could you go back on your word , you left me no choice , so I went back to hustling , I'm sure you heard.
Stress and pain had went away , but now they abide back in my body , here to stay.
In my eyes burned a love , but once again , the worst was brought out of a thug.
Struggling to survive , thats what I do , go ahead and cross my path playa , cause your gonna feel it too.
These holes in my heart needs no patch , I'm back in the streets , and this time I won't get attached.
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THUGGIN4REAL
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Re: Back To The Streets
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by Kay-Kay on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 05:03:32 PM AEST
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GREAT POEM, REALLY TRUE TO WHAT YOU FEEL AND WHAT YOU DO KEEP THE GREAT POEMS COMIN'
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Re: Back To The Streets
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by Daniels_Princess on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 05:07:01 PM AEST
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Two comments..
On the poem, it was great..as always..
As for what youre saying..You know how I feel about your old ways..and you might start thinking "I dont really care, you're not me, you can't control my life, you don't know me that much" so I'm just gonna share a little stroy with you..
Daniel used to be like you..he used to hustle, he used to be out on the streets, killin people..switch blade was his personal fav..not a gun..He tried to quit all that..just like you did..tried to stop smoking, stop sniffin coke..he had to go to court awhile back, and after all that was done with..he went right back to his old ways..and now he has people after him..they already killed his cousin..and now their after him..
I don't want that happening to you..and I know I don't even hardly know you, but from the times that I have talked to you, you seem really sweet..really nice deep down..and I want to get to know you better..
When Daniel told me everything that was happening, I cried..so much that I couldn't hardly breath..I cried for about 3 hours straight..And you can think whatever you want, but I'm gonna let you know right now..there are people who care about you..and I know that because I'm one of them, Greg..
You know you can always PM me, or email me or whatever and Imma always be there to talk..and I can't make up your mind, I can't control your life..just whatever you do, be careful..and know Im here, and that I care.. |
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Re: Back To The Streets
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by DesolantDreamer on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 05:07:48 PM AEST
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| I agree completely. There is this guy at my school who gave me his word that he wasn't trying to hurt me so I trusted him...guess what? He killed me. Man is indeed a frail creature so easily wooed and impressed. Stay strong. Someone needs to be. |
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Re: Back To The Streets
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 09:33:41 PM AEST
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| This is heartfelt intense poem! Dont let your heart get hard!!! |
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Re: Back To The Streets
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 01:35:31 AM AEST
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wow very deep indeed.
very well written piece. |
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