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Poisonous Mind
Contributed by
lonely-nobody
on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 04:14:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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(Verse 1:)
Anger flowing into my brain
The voices overpowering, driving me insane
Can't think of what I'm doing
Unaware of what I'm saying
Trying not to obey their words
I close my ears so they won't be heard
But they speak inside my head
The quiet won't be calming until I'm dead
(Chorus)
A mind poisoned by society
Trying to ruin the life of me
Bleeding my dreams on paper
Tempting to make them safer
(Verse 2:)
Failing me everytime
They try to tell me what's in my mind
Uncaring to the world around me
Seeing the pain but doing nothing about it
They think they know who I am
A stranger lurking inside my head
(Repeat Chorus)
(Verse 3:)
Struggling to overcome the sickness
I bow my head and pray for forgiveness
This havock I've created was not my own
It's them to blame for what I've done
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lonely-nobody
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2005-03-29 16:14:24]
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Re: Poisonous Mind
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by freckle on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 11:40:26 PM AEST
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This is a good write. It reminds me of one that my mom wrote called "The Introvert" I have it posted on the site. Good job and thanks for sharing!
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Re: Poisonous Mind
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by all_that_i_can_be on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 02:06:21 AM AEST
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| wow. i like it a lot. reminds me of some of my own. none that ive posted, but ones that ive wrote. great job. keep it up. |
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Re: Poisonous Mind
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by Ineedanap on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 03:24:42 AM AEST
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Good write. I liked it
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