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Love is.....
Contributed by
hopelessromantic17
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Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 03:46:35 PM in AEST
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Love is.....
something that cannot be written or told,
cannot be purchased or sold.
something that is never lost or won,
that is never half-way or partly done.
something that is impossible to give or take,
that is impossible to forge or fake.
something that is always confusing and misunderstood,
that is alwys beautiful and good.
something that will not be stolen or taken,
that will not be wrong or mistaken.
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Re: Love is.....
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by Greenlee on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 03:49:20 PM AEST
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| It was all very common. It was cute though. The only thing that really bothered me was the fact that the opening line is Love is.. and then most of the lines underneath made no sense when placed with it. |
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Re: Love is.....
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by allymp on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 04:03:56 PM AEST
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i loved this...its very cute and true...although i must say i disagree with the last line "that will not be wrong or mistaken." ...love is often mistaken for lust...but aside from that it was wonderful
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Re: Love is.....
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by wolfman on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 04:08:00 PM AEST
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welcome to YPDC, where you and your words fit in , no matter what. so please do enjoy yourself.
this was a sewwt poem, and yes a true loving relationship this is knowen to all is all of those things, but what about a relationship that is only one sidied or not knowen, they have all the emotion neede to accomplish this things but thay dont because therer is no connection made between the two individuals that are involved.( just some of what I think)
this was a very good poem it helped to define what love is. even though, you say it yourself... something that cannot be written or told... but it can be defined. very good. looking forword to reading more from you later so please do post again soon. be strong and God bless.
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