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Black Hole
Contributed by
Kay-Kay
on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 03:07:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Again i am in the dark place
Just like i was before
As i stare off into space
Straight through the earth into the core
The darkness draws me near
And it puts me into a trap
The darkness knows my deepest fear
My mind is bound to snap
I don't want it to end in shadows
Let alone begin in them
Hiding away from all my foes
They don't know where i've been
I'm living in this hateful world
Just like everyone else
Waiting for hate to send a whirl
And leave untaming welts
Falling into a deep dark pit
That's as hot as scolding fire
Hate, we shouldn't go through with it
Nobody should require
But there's nothing that anybody can do
Hate is spinning us out of control
The hate just spreads from me to you
We are living in a black hole
~Kay-Kay
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Kay-Kay
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2005-03-29 15:07:32]
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Re: Black Hole
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by hellsfallenangel on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 03:51:18 PM AEST
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i liked it it is ver good and it kinda true bye
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Re: Black Hole
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by THUGGIN4REAL on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 05:01:12 PM AEST
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| true. i like it. you got skills , keep it up |
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Re: Black Hole
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by Floo on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 08:39:12 AM AEST
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| fabulous poem!!! such a deep and moving piece of writing... a delight to read |
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