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Here We Go
Contributed by
ChadMichaelCampbell
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Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 02:25:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Here we Go
Away from the World
Just you and me
Here we Go
Away from the pain
Just you and me
Where are we going?
When will we get there?
Who am I running from?
What is chasing me?
Here we Go
Away from the World
Just you and me
Here we Go
Away from those who bring us down
Just you and me
Where is this pain?
When will it go away, or appear?
Who is bringing us down?
What is this really about?
Well, Here we Go
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ChadMichaelCampbell
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2005-03-29 14:25:28]
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Re: Here We Go
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by Greenlee on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 02:29:47 PM AEST
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| I'm usually not a fan of repeated lines but I liked this one. I like the fact that it left me curious as to what was going on but it didn't seem dark and moody. I'm really just not crazy about the last line. That's the only thing that bothers me. |
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Re: Here We Go
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 02:48:39 PM AEST
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This, to me, can de read in so many way. In my case, I see it as Me and my thoughts...trying to escape some of the harsh realities of life......
Loved it... Thank you.
Jenni |
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