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At the Seams
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 01:38:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Having to live in constant fear
Trying to find reason behind my tears
Dying slowly every day
Hurting myself just to get away
Falling through this never-ending hole
Completely overtaken by the cold
Waiting in anxiety for my life to end
Afraid my broken heart will never mend
Crying in truth and excruciating pain
Feeling so low and pleading insane
Beyond hope and living a lie
Past redemption and wanting to die
Hopeless, helpless, and utterly alone
Knowing in the end I’m on my own
Held together by false wishes and dreams
With unfixable tears, I’m ripped at the seams
Time is running out for this weakened soul
I welcome the darkness to take me whole
Giving up on giving up slowly again
It’s too late for me, I’ve reached the end
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blue_angel
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2005-03-29 13:38:16]
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Re: At the Seams
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by Jaycee on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 12:09:44 AM AEST
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| If poets are like doctors, then you must be a neurosurgeon. Okay, strange comparison, I know, but somehow you go deep into the head with scalpel and surgical precision. Not just anyone could do that and get the job done right (me, I'm squeamish 'round blood). Anyway, I see poetry like writing (I've done more of the latter) and you take us through the layers to your poor tortuted soul. While I salute your obvious talent, I feel for you and detest the circumstances that drive you to this pain. I can only hope/pray/plead/whatever that your life improves. |
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Re: At the Seams
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by guiltycircles on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 08:39:20 AM AEST
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| i know the feeling and your words are amazing... you've captured the feeling and despair, very good write |
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