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Stolen Life
Contributed by
jyssvw
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Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 01:28:10 PM in AEST
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The night ends with a lonely tear
Stomping feet sounding clear
Tracks that lead far away
Lovely calm held at bay
Rejection of the common sort
Sleep is effortless or so I thought
Reminders of pleasured pasts
Words speed down too damn fast
Encircle the lines on my face
Aging rapidly in only one place
Clean my body in a painful bath
Of bleached holy water and Gods wrath
Erase the sin than lives within
Focus on the needle pointed pin
A prick or two will surely do
To awake my mind and renew
The person I have replaced
Feats of hazardous poison faced
Slowly drugged into a pile of wax
Immobilized by an overburdened tax
I am ordered to pay a fine
For a life I stole, that can never be mine
Copyright ©
jyssvw
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2005-03-29 13:28:10]
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Re: Stolen Life
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by Remi on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 01:53:11 PM AEST
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| wow that is a nicely write and just remind me of someone taking responabiliy for what they did and now owning up to it, so nicely done |
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Re: Stolen Life
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by Monkeybones99 on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 12:19:04 AM AEST
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| I just wanted to say.....WOW....I really liked the flow and meaning of this poem. |
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