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Afternoon Swim
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 09:42:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Let us stroll down
to the rivers edge, my love
Free ourselves....
of these clothes which bind
Jump in with me baby
the water's just fine
We'll swim all our troubles away
Let the river take all...
today
Climb out
Renewed....refined
Find a nice flat rock
rest awhile
Dry our bodies
in the warm sunshine
We'll listen to the river flow
Birds winging high above
Calling out to one another
in sweet songs of love
Gentle wind blows
through the pines
makes a whispering sound
Peace and tranquility
all around us
Basking in the sun
until our bodies are...
golden brown.
Laura Horner
3-29-05
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Re: Afternoon Swim
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by unrestrained19 on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 09:50:42 AM AEST
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| ahhh beautiful poem to read on such a terrible rainy morning...my favorite place on earth is anywhere there is water...I could sit and stare for hours on end...GREAT POEM!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: Afternoon Swim
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by bernard on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 10:24:36 AM AEST
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| Laura a most beautiful poem I could feel the warming sun and the peace and tranquility were perfect. keep smiling bernard. |
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Re: Afternoon Swim
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by Ravensfire on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 06:04:17 PM AEST
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| Laura, reminds me of my youthful days in Ohio skinny dipping, the thrill, the excitement, the warm air drying my skin, loved this write. Thank you for bringing thoses memories alive again. |
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Re: Afternoon Swim
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by freckle on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 09:41:07 PM AEST
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What a nice relaxing poem! Too bad my hermit man would never ever take off his clothes outdoors! I'll just have to imagine it in your poetry...LOL
Carol |
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Re: Afternoon Swim
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by Willofree on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 12:37:01 PM AEST
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Wonderful poem with a very enticing description, with vivid imagery. Takes me back to my youth: however I think I would enjoy it just as much today. Never too old for skinny dipping. :)
Have a nice swim Laura
Willofree, Terry |
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Re: Afternoon Swim
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by emystar on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 04:51:05 AM AEST
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good write. Sounds like fun. gotta get started on my tan.
thanks for sharing such an intamate moment.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Afternoon Swim
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 01:33:30 PM AEST
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pretty and sweet:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Afternoon Swim
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by xXcrossedXx on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 09:32:15 AM AEST
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Very nice write, its amazing what water can do to you.
--amanda-- |
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Re: Afternoon Swim
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by Sinned on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 09:51:19 PM AEST
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Laura
Sweet
Sinned |
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