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Another chance
Contributed by
stonedraider23
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Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 09:04:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I hate to sleep
I hate to wake
Knowing your not laying beside me
Maybe that’s why I hate
No reason to love
You’re not here to show me love
We’ve waited so long to meet
We’ve been in many relationships
I don’t know about you but I regret mine
My past haunts me
You remind me of what I’m missing
You show me what I want to have
Just hearing your voice, your laugh
Brightens my day
But knowing your hearts not mine drives me away
Sickens my heart
Tears me apart inside
I won’t give up
You are my dream
To hold and kiss you
Have become my number one goal
In my life, please give me another chance
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2005-03-29 09:04:49]
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Re: Another chance
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 09:09:11 AM AEST
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| Wow, your feelings really come across in this poem i love it!! |
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Re: Another chance
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by Kay-Kay on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 03:19:35 PM AEST
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Great write, emotions are strongly showed in it, i like the way you use such good expression words keep it up
~Kay-Kay |
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Re: Another chance
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by savedbydeath on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 06:55:25 PM AEST
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| awesome write,some advice,never give up on something or someone u truly love,1 day they'll become urs,dont try hard,dont be someone who ur not,be urself,show them... |
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Re: Another chance
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by LanieBug on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 03:08:52 PM AEST
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| i loved this poem! i feel this way about u. i hope that one day u will give me ur heart knowing u can trust me in everythng. CAN WE START OVER? WILL U GIVE ME ANOTHER CHANCE? to be that person u were once madly in love with. just tell me what i need to do. I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!! |
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