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I want you to be mine........
Contributed by
ravisada
on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 06:05:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When the sun shines in my life
then I want you to be my light
When the moon bring romantic nights
then I want you to be my Juliet
When the wind blow his whistle
then I want you to be my dancer
When the ocean calm and pleasant
then I want you to be my love boat
When the rain shower with lightening and thunder
then I want you to be in my arms that surrounded
When the heart thrust for love and pleasure
then I want you to be in my soul
When the dreams brings reality in life
then I want you to be my lady for ever
Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
Copyright @2005 Ravi Sathasivam
Copyright ©
ravisada
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2005-03-29 06:05:41]
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Re: I want you to be mine........
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 06:29:58 AM AEST
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| very vivid. i liked it a lot. |
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Re: I want you to be mine........
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 07:20:24 AM AEST
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a VERY BEAUTIFULL WRITE and good luck in your quest.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: I want you to be mine........
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by P0rNStAr on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 08:44:47 AM AEST
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| Very nice... |
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Re: I want you to be mine........
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 09:05:41 AM AEST
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| What a romantic poem i loved it! |
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