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Dawn
Contributed by
Rumplestilskin
on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 05:08:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Fleeting shadows writhing in the symphony of the dawn
Souls singing to the waking of the sun
Morning has come to the meadows chill
Her warm voice calling in the cool of the still
Gazing green sentinels garbed in glittering dew
Flowers shedding tears with the passing of the moon
Echos of the elusive evanesce in the air
As birds launch off with the singing of a prayer
Beauty unsurpassed by mere illusion
The painted picture of pure perfection
Copyright ©
Rumplestilskin
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2005-03-29 05:08:58]
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Re: Dawn
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by Sheaa on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 12:16:10 PM AEST
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| you have real talent. i love the way you used metaphors and comparisons. can't wait to read it when it's finished=]. |
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Re: Dawn
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by Monkeybones99 on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 12:26:08 AM AEST
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| Great start and I too am looking forward to when it is finished. |
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Re: Dawn
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 02:42:15 AM AEST
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a rather inspiring piece.
you have captured a world complete with miniscule detail. i am very fond of such work...detail is ever so important. your words are lucid and vivid, utilising imagery to its full potential. your expression is truly artistic. you have exploited personification to its finest extent. i think you needn't an ending...as you already have one....
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