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Eyes
Contributed by
xtcslilangel
on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 04:02:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Eyes are the windows to the most hidden soul,
Two doorways to the mind.
A way to look into the black unknown
To secrets we cannot find.
They lock on thoughts too private,
Too unbearable to explain.
Deep drowning pools of sadness
When someone caused you pain.
Like magic mirrors they show
Your ever-longing dream.
Like odd molds of clay,
They express your feeling when you want to scream.
So, when a person seems cruel
Or feels unbearably far,
Just look into their eyes
And see who they really are.
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xtcslilangel
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2005-03-29 04:02:35] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Eyes
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 06:05:00 PM AEST (User
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Aww I really like this.
The rhyme was quite good, as was the rhythm of the piece.
Also, the flow was great!
Nice work, keep writing!
~kt |
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