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My Love
Contributed by
xtcslilangel
on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 03:50:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When I first met you,
Love was not there.
But at that moment,
I didn't care.
Then I matured,
and so did you,
I then found out,
That my love was true.
You're the man of my dreams,
You're the star in my sky,
But still you don't know,
And that's because I'm shy.
Then finally on,
The very last day,
I took your hand,
And led you away.
Away from the world,
I spilled out my heart,
And that's when I knew,
That our love would start.
Now we're together,
Happy and free,
I'll stay by your side,
Until I cannot breath.
And even after,
We've passed away,
My love for you,
Won't ever fade away.
Copyright ©
xtcslilangel
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2005-03-29 03:50:53]
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Re: My Love
(User Rating: 1 )
by araphra on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 04:14:34 AM AEST
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| A little bit cheesy for my tastes, but it is still really quite beautiful. Well done. |
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Re: My Love
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by P0rNStAr on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 09:01:08 AM AEST
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| It's really cute and im happy for you it gave me goose bumps ;P |
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