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We Are As One
Contributed by
white_tiger
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Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 11:53:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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The sky was mixed in a rainbow haze
Colours of orange and yellow mixed in a daze,
Memories of the past float across the sky
Thoughts of haunted souls gaily do fly.
Clouds as fluffy as cotton filled with tears
Ready to fall at the slightest fears,
The wind blowing faster with every breath
Reminiscences filled with every death.
Faces that can be seen in the moonlight
Voices that caress all through the night,
Whirlpools mixing emotions running wild
Tension created by situations so mild.
The fiery sun that produces rays so fine
Tow souls that could never be mine,
Passion entwining spirits in the dark
Calls of loneliness raised by the larks.
Burning lights that glows on my skin
Representing malice of guilt and sins,
Tomorrow, when the eye meets the sun
Together, our spirits will bind into one.
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2005-03-28 23:53:46]
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Re: We Are As One
(User Rating: 1 )
by Urizen on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 07:02:00 PM AEST
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| Interesting imagry, very vivid, overall I think it is a very good poem, thank you for sharing it |
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Re: We Are As One
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by Overstated on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 07:05:46 PM AEST
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youve opened the window to natures poetry - i loved this so great lines like 'Memories of the past float across the sky
Thoughts of haunted souls gaily do fly' powerful stuff!.
feel free to comment on my work also at: http://www.your-poetry.com/modules.php?name=Your_Account&op=userinfo&username=overstated
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