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The Road Along
Contributed by
white_tiger
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Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 11:52:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Going along the road of life, memories come surging back
So many things that in my childhood I did lack,
No toys to play with, no rattle to shake
No teddy to cuddle, no cake to bake.
Life was so dull; nothing glittered anymore
So many secrets my heart did boar.
Not one of them was allowed outside my soul
‘Cos if they were, they would leave a hole
And that hole can heal,
A wound my beloved gave me; a wound I can’t conceal.
Going along the road of life, memories falling astray
A thousand secrets, a millions words she did betray
I see her face; can she see mine?
Reflections in the mirror shining so fine.
Walking down the path was a burden for me
It was only my eyes that couldn’t see.
I wanted to move on; leave the past behind
But my soul I just couldn’t seem to find.
A blur each day; I felt in a daze
A monotone life, all in a haze.
Going along the road of life, memories falling apart
A place for her will always be held in my heart.
All alone here I’m seated
My heart, I feel is constantly defeated.
So many times I turned to her
When I was happy and when I was blue.
But she just walked away from me
My sorrow she never did see.
I tried to talk to her each and every day
But never once did she ever come my way.
A million words can never heal
What wound I’ll forever have to conceal,
I thought that together we’d walk the way home
But today, I’ll only walk that road alone.
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Re: The Road Along
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by skadmatrix on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 01:14:34 AM AEST
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| life is really hard for everyone i think, but good words to express it |
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Re: The Road Along
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by Gothchyk on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 01:23:32 AM AEST
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| great wirte, it had a nice flow to it. what would beauty be without the pain we feel in life, no one likes pain but i think it helps us appreciate the beauty in this world more. Anyway good job. |
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Re: The Road Along
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by hopelessromantic17 on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 03:54:39 PM AEST
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| well written. good job continuing the metaphor or walking throughout the poem. the only negative is that it did not flow well for me and i got lost and had to reread several times, also it tends to be a little repetative but overall very good. |
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