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A million times
Contributed by
kolbrun
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Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 08:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I have seen you a million times
And every time I see you
I fall in love with you all over again
My heart starts to race
My frown turns into a smile
And all my worries are now in my past
When you smile at me my heart melts
You give the sweetest hugs
Every time you hug me
Your smile is like a new day
Your sense of humor is like no other
The ability you have to make me smile
Is all you need you love me
Your laugh is so soft and sweet
Just looking in your eyes
Makes me melt inside
Your lips look so soft
Soft enough to kiss
You, yourself relive me from all pain
Your hands are as soft as a pillow
The way you comfort me is amazing
Every time we say good-bye
I start to cry
I say good-bye to you too many times
I said good-bye to you a million times
Copyright ©
kolbrun
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2002-12-20 08:00:00]
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Re: A million times
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by OreO on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 12:12:37 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful...i hope your boyfriend saw this one because your words are beautifully written to him...i would like to see one of your poems written in icelandic??? If you feel like posting one i will comment on it....i know i won't be able to read it perhaps but i love to see different languages , i think french and italian languages are very pretty....thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it alot.....and welcome to YPDC?? i don't think i've seen you here before...i look forward to reading more of your poetry....
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Re: A million times
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 09:29:39 AM AEST
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| I just love your poem Kolbrun..... |
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Re: A million times
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by maria_mendonez_ibardolas on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 08:19:10 AM AEST
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| very sweet,i love it.keep up writing some sweet love poems.God bless |
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Re: A million times
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by ke on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 07:24:53 AM AEST
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beautiful,brought tears to my eyes, love is such a wonderful feeling,another great write.
KE |
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Re: A million times
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 07:27:17 AM AEST
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If love is not a game, then why are there so many players...
Love hurts so doesnt it. Its why he lied to you that matters, you obviously have been hurt deeply. Have you asked him why? or would that open something you dont want to hear.
Hope things improve soon my dear.
Equisite poem btw. |
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Re: A million times
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by karoody on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 10:41:06 PM AEST
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this is beautiful. you portray your love and emotions so well. best of wishes to you!
kara |
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Re: A million times
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 01:32:58 PM AEST
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| hi. you are a very talent poet miss kolbrun. sometimes i even think that you are related to some of the best poets that have been on this earth |
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Re: A million times
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 01:33:26 PM AEST
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| hi. you are a very talent poet miss kolbrun. sometimes i even think that you are related to some of the best poets that have been on this earth |
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Re: A million times
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by WiLlYwOnKa on
Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 10:35:46 PM AEST
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| This is a great poem. I can realli relate to this poem! |
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