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First Kiss
Contributed by
xxbreathlessx
on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 09:37:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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your eyes flirtatiously draw me in your trance
I知 lost in your smile, in your words
I知 lost in your romance
forbidden to be so lost in you
but myself I cannot help
take me away from your touch
before this moment turns to regret
your arms around me hold me tight
because I soon might slip away
your playful laugh
my numbing mind
you know I知 going to stay
you look into the depths of my eyes
and see nothing of what I am
but I知 too blinded
I知 too lost
I知 too caught up in your romance
your lips come close and I go numb
this moment forbidden in so many eyes
you don稚 know me
you don稚 want me
you just want what guys demand
lost in your kiss
in the moments breath
im lost in the touch
your lips possess
lost in the wrong
of nothing right
lost in the whispering of
the moments sight
pulling away I知 free
from the trance that you held over me
your eyes so shallow
as they glare into mine
and there it goes
my first kiss wasted
in such little time.
Copyright ﾂｩ
xxbreathlessx
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2005-03-28 21:37:24]
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Re: First Kiss
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by Stonedraider23 on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 09:44:37 PM AEST
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| good write my first kiss was wasted too but it wasnt sweet like urs lol i was wasted lol so it was a sad way didnt even love her and hardly knew her so just wanted that or sumthin |
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Re: First Kiss
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by TheRaven on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 09:48:06 PM AEST
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very emotional write, i'm very happy for you that you were able to at least get it down on paper finally. great job. i hope you've had the joy of realizing not all guys are like that, and maybe one will be able to share a very special moment with you, all b/s aside. good luck, and keep up the writing!
the raven |
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Re: First Kiss
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by jeza on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 09:49:17 PM AEST
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| this is the first poem ive read on this site and it is very good |
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Re: First Kiss
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by sweetncaring on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 10:02:35 PM AEST
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| I love it. Such a pretty poem. |
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Re: First Kiss
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by shelby on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 10:13:35 PM AEST
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you captured many emotions in this one mmmm nothing better than that first kiss never regret nothing is ever wasted its just a journey towards where you are now.... argggg slap me Im in a weird mood
this was very good
Michelle |
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Re: First Kiss
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by Gothchyk on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 10:21:52 PM AEST
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| very good write. |
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Re: First Kiss
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by skadmatrix on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 01:36:59 AM AEST
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| a first of anything is never a waste, life is full of surprizes and hardly any of them are perfect. but a vary nice poem, i enjoyed reading it |
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Re: First Kiss
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by waos on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 10:29:50 PM AEST
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Wow, that was so good, and so true. A good warning to those girls (and guys)
out there who still have their first kiss not given out. Save it for as long
as you can, till you hit the right person.
Nice job on this... flow was good, message really really good. Thank you for
posting it. It meant something to me.
~Waos/Kara |
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Re: First Kiss
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by Red_October on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 11:38:09 PM AEST
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| sweet and makes me remember a long time ago. nicely written! Tiffany J. |
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