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High on Love
Contributed by
vampy
on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 07:34:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Floating
Drifting aimlessly through the air
Tracing stars with my fingertips
Brushing clouds off my face
Floating away
Wrapped in your romance
Mesmerized by your eyes
My heart drifts along
Floating
Secret smiles, hidden desires
Flying through space
Soaring through the clouds
Floating away
My eyes read your love
My body feels your warmth
My mind wanders about, dreaming
Floating.
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Re: High on Love
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by TheRaven on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 09:49:46 PM AEST
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i like the atmosphere you created in this poem. not sure which ways up, which ways down when you're in love. i know what it feels like. great job
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Re: High on Love
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by xxbreathlessx on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 09:49:51 PM AEST
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| very heavenly, light piece you wrote here. it was beautiful. |
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