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My Darkness...Of my Soul
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 07:33:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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On a night like this there is no magic there is no bliss
Got a heart full of guilt, an empty space and faces I miss
The stars seem to serve no purpose except swallow up my darkened soul
Overshadowing me with false light and a grief I can’t control
I’m reminded of my wrong and many blind mistakes
I don’t deserve to see the light for the unrighteous road I take
The darkness suits me well for I am dark deep down within
Take me from it all Heavenly Father from this hellish life of sin
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pUnKa_RaCh
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2005-03-28 19:33:24]
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Re: My Darkness...Of my Soul
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 08:18:41 PM AEST
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| This is such a well written dark poem. I truly enjoyed reading this, since I can relate to some extent. Excellent work, as always. |
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Re: My Darkness...Of my Soul
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by TheRaven on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 09:52:35 PM AEST
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wow. very....dark, i guess. so well written, however. the rhyme just flows, no awkward pauses.
i know how easily these feelings can happen, but keep your head pointed high for Him, and remember what he sacrificed for us, so that you may rise with him.
keep up the great writing.....
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