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Our War as Youths of Today
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
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Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 07:30:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Have you ever felt afraid or wish that you would die?
We all seem lost in this world it’s what we feel you and I
Do you ever feel alone even though there are people everywhere?
Do you ever feel unloved like nobody will ever care?
Do you ever feel too different like there’s no place for you on earth?
Have you ever been hurt by someone feeling you have no worth?
Do you ever abuse yourself late in the darksome night?
Do you take out that knife which makes the sting seem alright?
Are you totally sad inside like nothing could make you happy?
Are you tired of waking up each day feeling depressed and crappy?
Have you ever been sliced by words or felt your heart dry and waste?
Ever wondered if the grass is greener longing for a different taste?
Have you ever been bullied and told you’re the ugliest thing alive?
Do you despise and hate your self with no apparent will to survive?
I know I’m not the only one for we have to battle emotions being teenagers
But I can’t help but feel exhausted because it’s the war we each must wager
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Re: Our War as Youths of Today
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by Vampy on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 07:38:08 PM AEST
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| Very true thoughts. Everyone feels that way at times, especially teenagers. |
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Re: Our War as Youths of Today
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 08:23:29 PM AEST
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| Thought provoking. Very well written. And sadly, it's all so true. |
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Re: Our War as Youths of Today
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by Live2Die on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 08:37:42 PM AEST
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| I cant say much after what Vampy said, b/c I agree completely and totally |
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Re: Our War as Youths of Today
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by EVERxSOxSWEET on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 11:04:01 PM AEST
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| i loved that, great poem..very true. where do we belong? |
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Re: Our War as Youths of Today
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by Gothchyk on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 01:36:10 AM AEST
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| i agree w/ marisa, a very thought provoking write, and i know i have felt many of the feelings you have described. Great write. |
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Re: Our War as Youths of Today
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 01:48:03 AM AEST
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It's such a true write but even if we aren't teens any more life is so hard.
I do remember tho way back when I was a teen feeling like I didn't belong any where.
Keep writing as even tho sad u did a great job writing this.
huggs,
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