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Thinking Clearly
Contributed by
hoist1atca
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Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 07:12:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I have come to make this simple deduction-
My choices in the past have led to my destruction-
For many times in the past I have been mistaken-
Led astray by things that I should have forsaken…
I have done things of which I am not proud-
And my mind has been so long lost within a cloud-
For many times I have found myself drinking-
Which in turn led to my irrational thinking…
The loss of thought within my head-
To bigger disasters could have someday led-
But for now I take each day slow-
And this way I am able to stay in control…
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Re: Thinking Clearly
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by TheRaven on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 07:26:03 PM AEST
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i'm glad you've at least come to this realization,
recognized the disguise,
before all the wrongs of your past
led to your demise.
don't let the shadow of one failure outshine your successes. keep your head up, great write
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Re: Thinking Clearly
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 07:36:18 PM AEST
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| wow i have been feeling this way too...thanks so much for sharing. lovely self realising poiece of work |
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Re: Thinking Clearly
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 01:54:31 AM AEST
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Very good write, a masterpeice.
Keep up the good writes and good work. If u fall getup and try again. We all fall and make mistake 'cause we're only human.
huggs,
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Re: Thinking Clearly
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by Sonic_phoenix on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 10:44:38 AM AEST
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congradulations you've found everyones weakness themselves. We are our worst enemy. It's an enemy we alone can face and you seem to be doing spectacularly. Good write
jen |
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