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Rise Above
Contributed by
NoSaint
on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 06:28:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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They can tell you
It can’t be done
They can tell you
You are wrong
But they can’t stop
The Dream
They can tell you
You are off key
They can tell you
They can’t hear
But they can’t stop
The Song
They can tell you
You have no rhythm
They can tell you
You have two left feet
But they can’t stop
The Dance
They can tell you
To stay down
They can tell you
You can’t win
But they can’t stop
The spirit
Dream, Sing, Dance but most of all
Let your spirit rise from the ashes
Of disappointment and soar
Above those who tell you
You can’t
Copyright ©
NoSaint
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2005-03-28 18:28:18]
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Re: Rise Above
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 07:05:32 PM AEST
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| Inspiring! |
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Re: Rise Above
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by TheRaven on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 07:30:11 PM AEST
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i agree, so inspiring and uplifting. one of the best i've read. great job thanks for sharing...
the raven |
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Re: Rise Above
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 08:40:47 PM AEST
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BRAVO!BRAVO!BRAVO!
As Ole Larry would say:
Roses at your feet!
Wonderful to read your inspiring poetry again Shari................love it!
Warm Love,
ConSue |
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Re: Rise Above
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by Maxximus on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 07:34:13 PM AEST
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| Right on... always strive to become what is, what you may become. You embody that attitude of 'never surrender' in this poem, quite well I might add. Good write and hold onto that pride of showing others what you're made of... especially when they say 'you can't' |
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Re: Rise Above
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 04:00:06 PM AEST
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Wow Shari!! This is excellent....so very inspiring...... Great work.....
Jenni |
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Re: Rise Above
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 04:58:34 AM AEST
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| Beautiful message..none can stop the spirit's rise...venkat |
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