|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Tonight
Contributed by
Mortis-Dark
on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 04:56:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
|
Your thoughts cloud me.
In a veil with treason with what ever reason.
Locking me away.
But yet you beckon for me to stay.
Hanging my my hands on a wire of rusted nails.
Reading forth unwritten tails.
The folk lore of our generation.
The lies of the next.
You put upon me your hex.
Your black magic consumes me.
Your blood runs through me.
Ive fallen far from your grace.
Im going to kill you.
With your vengeful lies.
I wont sleep until my brother closes his eyes.
Man will fall.
With broken hearts which bear no wings.
To descend deep into a dark era.
I wont leave you.
Tonight.
Copyright ©
Mortis-Dark
... [
2005-03-28 16:56:09]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Tonight
(User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 08:50:58 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Woah... this is awesome..
You have powerful words, here. You have written some good dark poetry.
I really adore this:
"Your thoughts cloud me.
In a veil with treason with what ever reason.
Locking me away.
But yet you beckon for me to stay."
Stunning write,
Phil |
|
|
Re: Tonight
(User Rating: 1 )
by MLCstar on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 01:30:00 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Not your best but I still enjoy it. Your writing is just so incredibly sensual. Maybe it is just me but I think it is. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
