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My son
Contributed by
Sensommar
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Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 02:37:11 PM in AEST
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My son is sleeping
and God is with him.
Long legs all over the bed.
Big hands on the blanket.
Sixteen,
not a boy,
not a man.
How can this happen?
Motherhood is a mystery
and a miracle
God is painting a masterpiece
as I am watching.
Copyright ©
Sensommar
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2005-03-28 14:37:11]
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Re: My son
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 02:57:29 PM AEST
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| beautiful poem |
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Re: My son
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by Glory_Child on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 02:57:51 PM AEST
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This very much reminds me of my second son. He too is extraordinary. Like yours, God is with him an His hand is large enough to hold my long-legged son.
Nice Word -- Keep your pen moving... |
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Re: My son
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by JacobsKK on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 03:19:15 PM AEST
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wow, what a thought. That poem sure is one that makes you think about life. Great work!
-JacobsKK |
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Re: My son
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by bigtig6269 on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 03:55:50 PM AEST
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| reminds me of my poems "My Son (Thanks Dad)" I don't have one yet, but I want one soon |
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Re: My son
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by nativesunflower4 on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 05:34:06 PM AEST
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| Beautiful work here...This is what motherhood is all about!!! |
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Re: My son
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 11:45:06 PM AEST
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"God is painting a masterpiece
as I am watching."
Beautiful. |
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Re: My son
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by emystar on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 02:27:22 AM AEST
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An aweome writ . reminds me of my own son which is grown with his own kids now.
njoy it whil ya can.
huggs,
emy |
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