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sensational seances
Contributed by
duch
on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 02:30:27 PM in AEST
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In fall from life I got empty heart and bloodshot eyes.
I don't remember this people and this places
I have knacks too sensitive so
Nuances, sensational seances
In nonsense sense is only advance
I rise above this on special effects
Target: duch onto leaves of whiteness
I flow lightly like helium.I assure - as enemies
contact with floor.
Without map - along wall to door
Money,money...question? look for sense.
Already myself I don't know:
sometimes as this which turned you Eden
Sometimes twenty plus one equals seven
So one on one,dark corridors - death. Then no irony
close cynicism is and monotony
So every day audibility on full
Already without fear...
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duch
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2005-03-28 14:30:27]
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Re: sensational seances
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 03:04:46 PM AEST
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Re: sensational seances
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by Glory_Child on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 03:13:01 PM AEST
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This is an excellent poem. Here's my interpretation, if you will. The speaker is drunk; not on wine or alcohol, but on knowledge and his/her imagination. "...no irony close cynicism is and montony..." to me, this states that when you escape into a cognitve life, your 'physical mind' (per se) dies, ("...So one on one, dark corridors - death...") and revives you 'snap into reality' ("...audibility on full...without fear...").
Nice Work -- Keep your pen moving... |
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Re: sensational seances
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by JacobsKK on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 03:28:49 PM AEST
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A little confusing for me, but overall, a good poem. Don't be discouraged though, I am not the greatest reader, so keep writing. :-)
-JacobsKK |
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Re: sensational seances
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by blue_angel on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 10:44:07 AM AEST
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oooh i like it. that is a great poem. i rilly like the style you use here. great job!
luv n hugs,
jennie* |
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