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farewell to a fool
Contributed by
Sonic_phoenix
on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 02:17:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Beacons of the brightest light
guide me through my darkest nights
hopes and dreams
broken beliefs
show me the light
faith is gone hope is lost
all has ended and come to not
but is this the end or the begining
hope should be never ending
so bright stars shine
o'rien guards my heart this day
as i give up and fly away
borrowed wings do not falter
when lies become truth
what can come after
the games we play break and bend
there is no time left to mend
shadows dance across the wall
what could have led to such a big fall
a malovlent nights dream
i'm done i quit
we both no you won't hear me
so this is how it goes
this is the stories end
amazing to believe i had called you a friend
i had believed you to be more then that
more then a fake face and false laugh
my secrets you betrayed by more then half
so good bye you fools fool
in the end i'm more than you
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Re: farewell to a fool
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by JacobsKK on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 03:38:44 PM AEST
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Wow, good write. You really know how to piece your words together. Keep it up :-)
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Re: farewell to a fool
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by hoist1atca on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 06:48:30 PM AEST
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Nice write-A lot of emotions and well versed...
However...
Being the fool is only a small part of love and friendship...
If your heart felt it was real for you then it was true...
I too have played the part of the fool- still do with the passing of each thought that is about a love or friend...
Feel free to read some words from a practicing fool such as I am...
Joe |
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Re: farewell to a fool
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by reflections on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 10:28:17 AM AEST
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The worst is that you were betrayed by those whom you would never have betrayed. Fooled, because you would not believe them to be capable of such a dastardly act.
You have proven yourself to be a better friend than those you choose to be your comrades.
John
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