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Im your wife not your daughter
Contributed by
reaven2004
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Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 02:12:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I hate it when you tell me what I cant do,
We are supposed to be equals and compiled,
But do you treat me like that,
No Im just a child,
I may be 18 and you may be 26 but were
married,
So quit treated me like Im 10,
You tell me I cant take the car you tell me
to clean up my mess,
You say I drive you nuts sometimes,
But how do you think I feel to me your just
a test,
You tell me what to do when to do it and if
I dont do it right I fail,
Im 18 and Im stuck I need to break out of my
shell,
I love you and I need you,
And I want to be with you forever,
But you need to understand Im your wife,
Not your daughter.
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2005-03-28 14:12:30]
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Re: Im your wife not your daughter
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by Sonic_phoenix on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 02:20:57 PM AEST
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Good luck
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Re: Im your wife not your daughter
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by vampyrekiss on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 02:46:49 PM AEST
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First thats crazy that your married at 18 i could never do that but the i donno it was a good write and i don hope things change for you,
keep on writin
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Re: Im your wife not your daughter
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by vampyrekiss on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 02:50:17 PM AEST
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***** sorry cant type today i was tryin to say I DO hope things get better for you ya haha
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Re: Im your wife not your daughter
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 04:59:38 PM AEST
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| wow that is powerful...i like it. it shows how you really feel, and yes its true, youre his wife not his daughter, so he does need to let you be a woman. good luck on getting him to change. but sont get yourself into something that will get you hurt, physically and emotionally. |
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