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Strange Hours
Contributed by
ChadMichaelCampbell
on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 02:08:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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You don't understand me
So I continue driving at strange hours
Alone
Afraid
Driving at strange hours
You told me it was over
So I left in the car
Cold
Empty
Driving at Strange hours
Your final kiss
Sealed my doom
Rushing
Racing
Driving at strange hours
Into the river
I slowly fall
Happy
Oblivious
Drowning at strange hours
Copyright ©
ChadMichaelCampbell
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2005-03-28 14:08:34]
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Re: Strange Hours
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kay-Kay on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 03:09:18 PM AEST
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awesome poem, i feel the emotion in this one like when you use certain words like "cold, empty" and words like that keep the poems coming
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Re: Strange Hours
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 07:06:56 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, ChadMichael. I'm glad you're not suicidal!!
This was very emotional and it was well written. I liked your style...
(I also like your name)
Jenni |
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Re: Strange Hours
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by P0rNStAr on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 09:30:45 AM AEST
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| It describes very well almost like there was images layed along with it short but not less good write |
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