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Goodnight
Contributed by
fielding88
on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 12:08:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Goodnight,
If only for tonight.
I have solemn faith
You’ll finally see the light.
When tomorrow comes
We won’t pick up this fight.
So goodnight,
If only for tonight.
I miss your smile,
And words you’d often speak.
I miss your face,
Has it been just a week?
What lie was told
That finally made us part?
Who knew false words
Couldn’t mend a broken heart…
This thing won’t last,
You mean too much to me.
It’s just the past,
There’s so much more to see.
We skipped ‘hello,’
No need for pleasantries.
But forgive me now,
When all I say is 'please.'
Goodbye,
If only for today.
No heated words,
There’s no more left to say.
I have my faults,
And you loved me anyway.
Can I say goodbye…
And leave you where you lay…?
Copyright ©
fielding88
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2005-03-28 12:08:54]
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Re: Goodnight
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 02:50:10 PM AEST
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What a sad emotive write. I liked it a lot
You've done well in showing such deep feelings into a such a wonderfull poem
Keep up the good work.
Jane |
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Re: Goodnight
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 05:05:42 PM AEST
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| reminds me of a lot of my past situations except they seemed to last longer than a day or even week. excellent poem, but thats no surprise. what would be surprising is if you wrote less than perfect. goodbyes, so many people hate those words, but without them nothing would ever change except the relationships quality. |
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Re: Goodnight
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by breny on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 05:22:15 PM AEST
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oooo I liked this poem!
It's very emotional and you express it very well.
Nice write Marc!
~Brenna~ |
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Re: Goodnight
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 02:40:06 AM AEST
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Wow that is an amazing emotional write.
well done. |
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Re: Goodnight
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 04:49:48 PM AEST
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Very expressive and honest. This is excellent writing, my friend.
Andrew
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Re: Goodnight
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 10:01:21 PM AEST
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| i just had to read this one again. =] brilliant poems make me want to read them again =] i think i love it better than the first time, that is a feat because usually i cant stand to read poems a second time. if only i could write as good as this all the time. |
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Re: Goodnight
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by xXcrossedXx on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 06:39:56 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem, very moving with a taste of sadness.. I felt it more of a poem about letting go and thats one of the topics that just rip my heart up.. this was a fantastic write. The second stanza I enjoyed it set the mood and feeling for the whole poem and then ending was very sad with the '...' and the '?' at the end.. amazing write.
--amanda-- |
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Re: Goodnight
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by brew on
Sunday, 24th February 2008 @ 02:53:59 PM AEST
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WOW.........what happened? your words got me, so ...not them>>>>>>>
WHat beauty ,,,it flowed well
Brew~! |
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