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.-.under the stairs.-.
Contributed by
guts_n_glitter
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Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 09:49:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I lay dead under the stairs
Waiting for you
Dreams of flying high over purple skies
Losing breath
Feeling the air through our fingertips
Peeling away at unwanted skin
To an unknown feeling of happiness
But until then i lay dead under the stairs
Collecting dust
Knowing we'll be together again
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2005-03-28 09:49:15]
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Re: .-.under the stairs.-.
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 10:52:27 AM AEST
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Re: .-.under the stairs.-.
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by mina-1 on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 04:59:33 PM AEST
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This is a beautiful, descriptive and sort of sad write. The imagery set is wonderful and the poem in itself is wonderfully written. Well done.
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Sue |
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