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Take The Time To Read
Contributed by
Nos_Bunny
on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 09:43:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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My hands to feel, And coress your heart,
Our souls combine, We are never apart.
My eyes to look, And see your smile,
Our souls follow, As we walk a mile.
My nose to smell, And sedate my mind,
Without it, no one to feel, No soul to find.
I taste your love, From every kiss,
My beginings end now brought to this.
Loosing my sences, Loosing my style,
Knowing i'm still young, the grim waits awhile.
Did I live it like the last, Or did I live it like the rest,
Will I pass away midnight, Or is this just a test.
Its time running out, I have a few seconds left,
Reading this poem, I hold my final breath.
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Nos_Bunny
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2005-03-28 09:43:13]
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Re: Take The Time To Read
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 09:45:15 AM AEST
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I like this, it's sweet.
The flow is good, and I really like this:
Did I live it like the last, Or did I live it like the rest,
Will I pass away midnight, Or is this just a test.
It sorta reminds me of Cinderella.
Good write,
Phil
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Re: Take The Time To Read
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 10:55:08 AM AEST
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| well done, a nice read |
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Re: Take The Time To Read
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by brew on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 09:22:10 PM AEST
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The way goes.......Live life to the fullest.....or like its the last day ever....that goes for all.! We never know when it will be gone. Take all for heed and nothing for granted.......really.!!!!!!!!!!! Most do.........Sounds like ya do not want to! So make it happen.LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wonderfull feeling write
Brew~ |
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