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No More
Contributed by
Vermilion
on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 09:32:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Over obligation
No more lies
If they have to not tell truthful words
Don't say anything at all
Just fall
No comply
No condescend
I wish the watchful bliss to end
Bliss in negativity
Like black ink overriding me
No more cheating
No more time
We're running out
So run
Run away
And maybe escape
To freedom that enslaves us
Wraps us in His arms
And laughs
God, oh devient one
So evil yet so purely good
How do you handle those above
Who thought you were so much more
Yet so much less
Then what you are?
What you were
Was a death magnified
A truth in the lie
No more lies
I can't swallow freedom
I choke
I'm broken
Snapped in the middle
And the essense of me poured out
.Out.
So piece me back together
Seperate me from them
And stitch my rightful soul in place
Or take my hand and lead the way
To where I never wanted to go
.No.
-No more lies-
No more *deleted word* lies
Copyright ©
Vermilion
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2005-03-28 09:32:43]
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Re: No More
(User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 09:38:03 AM AEST
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Hmmm, I kinda like this...
I think that you could have probably replaced "*deleted word*" with another would that would have fit, but that's your choice.
I like this:
Run away
And maybe escape
To freedom that enslaves us
I may not quite agree with this, but a good poem nonetheless.
Welcome to YPDC,
Phil
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Re: No More
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 10:57:32 AM AEST
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| excellent.....a nice piece of work |
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