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beautiful tragedy

Contributed by Rxqueen on Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 08:42:55 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



With your lust fading, thoughts lingering in another place,
you can no longer look longingly into this desperate face
though you still hold tight and kiss me
blessed not, this beautiful tragedy

my forever following bittersweet ending
passion you are now just carelessly pretending

I am not the girl who could break your heart
cursed be from this compulsive start

how can you not see
everything I can be?
I would be your release
and you could make my aching cease...

but you love me not for I am tainted
broken
I am nothing but your pretty token

keep me in your pocket
or place me in a tarnished forgotten locket...

I am on my knees in a plea for YOU
but my eternal emptiness I can't bid adew...

betrayed by my own past and sadistic heart
destined for "the end" from the very start

but still this beautiful tragedy I hold dear
clinging to hope in an undenyable fear

too fast I ask too much?
if it is such
please then release me
set my broken heart free
for I no longer want to be
bound to this beautiful tragedy.








Copyright © Rxqueen ... [ 2005-03-28 08:42:55]
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Re: beautiful tragedy (User Rating: 1 )
by xtremcalibur on Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 08:50:37 AM AEST
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Now why would you want me to cry? I walked right through your poem and saw it for myself. What a beautiful write. Thank you for sharing an unselfish piece of work.


Re: beautiful tragedy (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 09:53:28 AM AEST
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I agree with the last comment, this is beautiful Jocelyn, so sad, and painful, too.

I don't even have a fave part of this, I love it all.

Great write hun,
Phil


Re: beautiful tragedy (User Rating: 1 )
by Sonic_phoenix on Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 10:33:14 AM AEST
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beautiful thats how my ex had been but the great thin g is is that he is now my ex. don't let it be up to him. your to talented to be plaqued with his romantic trajidy still relationships.
jen


Re: beautiful tragedy (User Rating: 1 )
by _Raspberry_ on Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 11:08:09 AM AEST
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This is very well written and describes very well the ending factor of most relationships.
Great write, fun and interesting to read.
~ Raspberry


Re: beautiful tragedy (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 03:09:50 PM AEST
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Whoa!!! that was just painful to read Joce.
Im kinda sad that you and Anth are seperating but i know it's good for you both and AJ.

Great write as always

Jane


Re: beautiful tragedy (User Rating: 1 )
by the_Ghost_Moth on Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 07:14:15 PM AEST
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We can only redeem ourselves.
You are as beautiful as you want to be.

"There is no pain
Where strength lies."
--Darth Maul
(from the comic book by Ron Marz)

--Ghosty


Re: beautiful tragedy (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 11:09:24 PM AEST
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A beautiful write though sad 2 the heart 2 read, such deep emotions and hurting words
why can't love just work out . . .

Dorian Chambers


Re: beautiful tragedy (User Rating: 1 )
by UnlovedChild on Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 11:11:53 PM AEST
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Aww Joce, this is such an amazing write. I felt the pain and it made me cry. Strong and brilliant. Great poem.


Re: beautiful tragedy (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 06:51:17 PM AEST
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Your poem is lovely, but remember you are the only one who can heal ur broken heart you and God!!!!!!!!!!!!
XOXOXJill


Re: beautiful tragedy (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 11:58:20 PM AEST
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wow, just, wow. I cannot put into words how this one touched me.


Re: beautiful tragedy (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 04:45:44 AM AEST
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Jocelyn,

As a poet ... beautiful
As a friend ... heart wrenching

... and all that we are left with as the final curtain falls ... is time

Nazmythian ~


Re: beautiful tragedy (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 04:09:07 AM AEST
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so sad very sad.
well done.


Re: beautiful tragedy (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 03:04:20 PM AEST
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God this was sad filled with longing and
such unbearable pain it was almost hard to
read. Such honesty wow thanks for sharing
this and I hope to see you post a new poem
soon.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: beautiful tragedy (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 11:24:51 PM AEST
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Heartbreakingly good, your pain comes through loud and clear....How very sad. I like your style of poetry. Scorp.


Re: beautiful tragedy (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 06:29:26 PM AEST
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I'm at such a loss for words. So many times you've commented
on my poetry and I have failed to find the words to give yours justice.
I was deeply moved by this piece, J. You are a brilliant poet.
*in silent awe*

~Breezy




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