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my views on life
Contributed by
fallensilence
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Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 09:00:00 PM in AEST
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in this life dismal and dreary
all who shine fade away and are buried
young men grow old and decay
endless love never seems to stay
our loved ones must die sometime
this light reflecting off of all of us
as bright as it may seem it will not last
its here so the future has a past
our present may seem hopeful
every passing second steals some life
pain is life, life is emotion, emotion is art
it must lead me somewhere...
i must be alive because of all the pain
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Re: my views on life
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by OreO on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 11:36:10 AM AEST
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I must be alive because of all the pain....that is certainly a line to remember that is beautifully written the way you wrote your views on life....i've never really sat and thought about being alive because of all the pain....wow...that's deep if you think about it....this has given me much to think about thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it alot...Keep em' coming..your poetry takes me to places i haven't been...
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Re: my views on life
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by alternachik29 on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 03:34:46 PM AEST
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| As Oreo, you have given me some comtemplations. Thanks for sharing! keep up the good work! |
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Re: my views on life
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by tease_whizz on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 05:08:19 AM AEST
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another excellent write - i can really relate to what you're saying here. this is a really evocative poem - it gives us a lot to think about.
i love the line - 'pain is life, life is emotion, emotion is art', thats basically my philosophy on life. the last lines remind me of the song 'iris' by the goo goo dolls, one lyric is 'when you bleed just to know you're alive'. great poem, keep them coming, Kate xxx |
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