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Fatherless
Contributed by
skadmatrix
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Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 01:57:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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just a small child
death has overcome
cold and dark
has lost part of his heart
death has taken its toll
the end of his family
at a young age
to live in a smaller one
but will always be alone
numbing the pain
with what will work
sometimes with games
sometimes with work
friends help alot
but nothing will work
on filling this hole
with soil and dirt
making him feel full
numbing the hurt
but when work is over
and games are done
friends are all gone
in the darkness
the pain returns
he sees others fathers
there childs role model
but he has none
needs to make his own life
but the hole got bigger
needs more dirt
to stop the hurt
finds more friends
and dose more things
time will only tell
what this will bring
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skadmatrix
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2005-03-28 01:57:55]
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Re: Fatherless
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by Gothchyk on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 02:07:06 AM AEST
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"but when work is over
and games are done
friends are all gone
in the darkness
the pain returns"
Pastimes can help hide pain, and friends sometimes help ease it, but some hurts never go away. Great write, and welcome to YPDC. |
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Re: Fatherless
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by emystar on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 02:25:06 AM AEST
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very sad but great writing. your first write is definently a masterpeice. You've found your calling.
Awesome.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Fatherless
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 05:44:50 PM AEST
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| Welcome! This is a wonderful first write you have here. Thanks for sharing, and I look forward to reading more from you soon! :-) |
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