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collected insanity
Contributed by
fallensilence
on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 08:20:00 PM in AEST
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MiscPoems
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newborn
still frail to the world
an innocent searching to understand more
fragile
a moments loss
a beggar living in nobility
knowledge
just a part of my desire, my need
my hunger, so pacify it indulge me
silent
death penetrating my soul
i live the hour for a minute.
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fallensilence
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2002-12-19 20:20:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: collected insanity
(User Rating: 1 ) by OreO on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 11:28:55 AM AEST (User
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You know the very last line here is what captured me....i live the hour for a minute...i don't think i've ever seen that written quite like that before...this poem brought back memories for me....someone once told me that i was his sanity once....and that was the best feeling i've ever felt in my life being told that...so this poem hit home with me...thanks for sharing it...i enjoyed it tremendously...Keep em' coming i look forward to reading more of your poetry...
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