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Shards of Serrated Passion
Contributed by
essentially9
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Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 10:06:07 PM in AEST
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Shards of Serrated Passion
I stare in the mirror, and it breaks
With the outpouring of my hate.
I touch my shattered reflection
And feel her cold hearted passion.
I walk across her fragmented remains
Bleeding nothing and feeling no pain.
She no longer exists,
And she'll never be missed.
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essentially9
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2005-03-27 22:06:07]
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Re: Shards of Serrated Passion
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by emystar on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 10:35:11 PM AEST
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A masterpeice of determination.
Great.powerfull, deep write.
huggs,
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Re: Shards of Serrated Passion
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 10:46:03 PM AEST
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What a senitive and vivid writtin this is, truly
lovely though sad . . .
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Re: Shards of Serrated Passion
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by blue_angel on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 10:54:52 PM AEST
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very well written... love the symbolism and figuritive language... great emotion in so few words... good job!
keep writing........ jennie* |
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Re: Shards of Serrated Passion
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by TheVoice on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 10:56:44 PM AEST
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It takes a strong person to break the mirror and look beyond, realizing it does not bring bad luck, but opens many new opportunities. You have a worth to others that have not known yet.
Hugs,
The Voice
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Re: Shards of Serrated Passion
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by UnlovedChild on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 12:25:33 AM AEST
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| A wonderfully written poem. |
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Re: Shards of Serrated Passion
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by venkat on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 12:33:59 AM AEST
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| Excellent expression of your emotion...:-)venkat |
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Re: Shards of Serrated Passion
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 04:52:47 AM AEST
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wow. amazing, well done
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Re: Shards of Serrated Passion
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 06:24:00 AM AEST
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God you're to good as a poet, non the less this was really good i enjoyed it a lot.
Jane
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Re: Shards of Serrated Passion
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by mina-1 on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 09:15:59 PM AEST
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wow Jen this is amazing to say the least.
a sheer master piece set with heart and determination. You go girl. Divine as always.
Hugs,
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Re: Shards of Serrated Passion
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by ForeverAlone on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 10:41:08 PM AEST
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You would greatly be missed jen...without a doubt....Amazing post, as always.
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