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Bloody Roses
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 09:46:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Out on my doorstep sat four bloody roses
Symbolizing the four days you’ve been gone
I open a new door after an old one closes
But there’s no erasing what you have done
I pricked my finger on a sharpened thorn
Blood trickling out of the open sore
And I rub my eyes so red and so worn
The pain is even deeper, hurting even more
I can’t believe what you’ve done to me
To cut so deep then leave me to die
I’m drowning now, you’ve made me bleed
And now I have no tears, inside I cry
The four bloody roses tightly coil around my heart
Until it silently shatters in the night
And now that you have torn me apart
Are you finally satisfied?
A puddle of blood forms in my hands
As I grip the roses so firmly in my fists
And I know that you will never understand
As the blood drips down my palms and to my wrists
Carefree I was, to trust you so far ahead
I take the pills and take too many doses
And now because of you I am dead
I thank you for the four bloody roses
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Re: Bloody Roses
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by Jyssvw on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 09:51:53 PM AEST
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good job
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Re: Bloody Roses
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by emystar on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 01:18:47 AM AEST
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Sad but written well.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Bloody Roses
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by skadmatrix on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 02:13:39 AM AEST
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| vary good, i liked it alot, but sad |
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