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You'll Never Know
Contributed by
NightOwl
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Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 03:50:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You'll never see this
And it's better that way
But I wonder if you know
How much you hurt me
You were a "kindred spirit"
Someone I trusted
Mom had cancer
The world was upside down
I was so afraid I would lose her
My family was falling apart
You were someone who I could believe in
And follow
A steady prescence
Always kind and funny
I could run to you
And know you would care
But then one day
You turned away
It was worse than a slap in the face
You hated me
I can see it in your eyes still
It is even worse now
I am someone you pick on and yell at
And you enjoy it
I am someone you despise
When you look at me
I can see how ugly I am in your eyes
It hurt me so much
I wish I could drown you
In the tears you made me cry
You are so two-sided
One side
Is kind and funny
The side I always wished you would show to me
But you only show me the ugly side of you
And I want to hate you for your betrayal
But I can't
Love that strong doesn't go away
It just turns to pain
I can never hate you
You take advantage of that
But only when no one is looking
Copyright ©
NightOwl
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2005-03-27 15:50:04]
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Re: You'll Never Know
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by sweet_lil_b2003 on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 04:48:25 PM AEST
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| wow for your first poem its very well written. I reli enjoyed it. I feel your pain. ~~Crystal~~ |
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Re: You'll Never Know
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by Kie on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 05:21:13 PM AEST
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When I read your title I recalled a poem I had written many years ago with the same title so I just had to read this.
It is a good poem and I don't think the people who hurt us ever really know how much it does hurt.
Kie |
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Re: You'll Never Know
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by In_a_while on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 05:29:20 PM AEST
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| very good first write, the emotion was all there which makes the best poetry. Thanks for sharing |
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Re: You'll Never Know
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 01:43:43 PM AEST
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| Absorbing story. |
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Re: You'll Never Know
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 05:41:43 PM AEST
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| A good write. I really look forward to reading more from you. :-) |
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Re: You'll Never Know
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by lady-quiet-dreamer on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 06:23:19 PM AEST
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| great poem |
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