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LOW...
Contributed by
peacelovhppnes
on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 03:11:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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No positve outlook
no tomarrow
no i love you
only sorrow
no reason why
or notice in advance
you moved right on
leavin me with a broken chance
Rememberin yesterday
endless love
Remembering you
sent from above
Lookin in the mirror
eyes filled with tears
happiness is gone
escaped with 2 empty years
Thinking of your touch
so simply satisfied
thinking of our past
filled with lies
Hoping that a smile
will soon reach my face
hoping that these feelings
are easily erased
Sending out a plea
puttin on a show
my body feels so empty
my spirits, so low
Copyright ©
peacelovhppnes
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2005-03-27 15:11:00]
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Re: LOW...
(User Rating: 1 )
by gabby521 on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 03:38:17 PM AEST
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| I loved it! I'm going through the same ordeal right now, though 2 years is longer than I could've hoped for my happiness to last. Great write and I know a little of what you're going through. Keep writing. |
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Re: LOW...
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by sweet_lil_b2003 on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 04:55:05 PM AEST
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| Babe good write it was amazing I loved it. It was filled with alot of though and feelings. ~~Crystal~~ |
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