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The girl I used to be
Contributed by
Sensommar
on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 02:00:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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My tree will know it all
the tree of my childhood
with the endless branches
and the many whispers
My tree remembers
the girl with the wind in her hair
the girl with the crazy laughter
the girl with the fear of living
the girl I used to be
before
In my tree
everything I want to be
will be
In my tree
I can see the world
but no one can see me
My tree remembers me
the girl I used to be
before
Copyright ©
Sensommar
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2005-03-27 14:00:22]
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Re: The girl I used to be
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by DesolantDreamer on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 02:14:28 PM AEST
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Very beautiful and inspirational. I like.
-Tsubaki |
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Re: The girl I used to be
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by Candi on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 03:30:23 PM AEST
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| i like this. its is very much how i feel about things sometimes. its like a special place u have that no one else can get to, touch, or tear down. great write. |
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Re: The girl I used to be
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by Kie on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 09:15:23 PM AEST
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As I read your poem my curiosity peeked and I wondered where that girl went and why?
Someone out there will see you. You might be surprised.
And the girl you used to be, sounds remarkable.
Keep writing...
Kie |
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Re: The girl I used to be
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 11:46:38 PM AEST
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| You know, I really do enjoy your style of writing. Nice work. |
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Re: The girl I used to be
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by emystar on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 02:35:29 AM AEST
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Luv your unique style.
huggs,
emy |
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