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Lost Smile
Contributed by
dreamer_for_eternity
on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 01:25:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I lost my smile
And I want it back
You lost it for me
When you said all that
You tore me down
By you I was judged
I lost my soul
I can't be who I was
It wasn't just
what you said
It's what you did
I was almost misled
I was already angry
I told you that, too
But you pushed me over the edge
My tolerance blew
I used to think you understood
I used to think you cared
I used to think I could depend on you
To always and forever be there
Maybe I just need a break
A day away from you
How much more can I take?
No more judgements from you
So please just back off
Stay a few steps away
Warning is I'm angry
Not responsible for what I say
My smile remains hidden
It's funny I don't want it anymore
For faking my laughter and happiness
Is not as important as before
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dreamer_for_eternity
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2005-03-27 13:25:49]
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Re: Lost Smile
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by sweet_lil_b2003 on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 05:14:50 PM AEST
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| Good written work even better words ~~Crystal~~ |
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Re: Lost Smile
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by Tweeky on
Wednesday, 23rd January 2008 @ 05:43:57 AM AEST
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A raw piece of emotion , well written . I like this alot .
I hope your smile is no longer hidden .
xx
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