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Dancing With the Saints
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 12:30:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Standing on a cliff high above the water
Listening to waves rushing to the shore
She closes her eyes with arms out stretched
She reaches for something more
Here with eyes shut tight
She can be anything she wants to be
She can accomplish great things
Here she is more than the world sees
Free she can almost fly
As the wind rushes past
Here her spirit soars
Conquering fears at last
Time holds no reign
On her dreams
Here on her perch
All is endless and serene
Now with the birds she flies
Released from worldly constraints
True spirit growing forward
Dancing with the saints
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NoSaint
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2005-03-27 12:30:04]
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Re: Dancing With the Saints
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by shelby on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 03:36:57 PM AEST
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wonderful upbeat write Shari
Michelle |
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Re: Dancing With the Saints
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by xrockstheheart on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 02:25:31 PM AEST
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| Hola, you are my next poem. I have posted an idea on the forum about commenting on the previous and next poem next to one's own. I am doing this today and also posting. I like the theme, I think the poetics need some work. later. |
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Re: Dancing With the Saints
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 04:02:31 PM AEST
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I loved the feeling I got after reading this.. Made me feel so free...so serene..
Thank you, my friend...
Jenni |
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Re: Dancing With the Saints
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 12:19:17 AM AEST
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| How nice to feel like that..all is endless and serene..:-)venkat |
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Re: Dancing With the Saints
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by tangle on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 09:43:32 PM AEST
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| Well thought and creative write that shines with confidence of a higher level. |
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Re: Dancing With the Saints
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by tangle on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 09:44:12 PM AEST
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Well thought and creative write that shines with confidence of a higher level.
what does she do |
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