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I'm already dead
Contributed by
DesolantDreamer
on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 11:47:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I see only black
And I hear you sobbing
Calling my name
Shaking my body
I know I'm dying
I know he shot me
My dear best friend
Please stop crying
This is best for me
Dying by his hand
Because don't you see
I died a long time ago
Do you remember when he left?
Do you remember the pain I felt?
That was so long ago
And I died then and there
And now he killed my body
Do not weep
I can finally be in peace
I am already dead
So it wasn't murder
Don't hate him, Dear friend
He eased my pain
And now I can finally be happy
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DesolantDreamer
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2005-03-27 11:47:54]
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Re: I'm already dead
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 01:11:01 PM AEST
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| I can really relate to this poem, it was very well written...great job |
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Re: I'm already dead
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by NightOwl on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 06:37:14 PM AEST
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Unfortunately, it is something I can relate to precisely... it is so painful when you lose someone, in spirit or in body, that I can't put it properly into words, but you have made a very good shot at it. Excellently done!
I am already dead
So it wasn't murder
It's very gripping... congrats!
*~Erin~* |
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