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Bashing Myself
Contributed by
PRoachFan
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Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 11:29:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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This face I show isn’t me
It’s who I pretend to be
Who am I trying to kid?
I’m not this happy
I’m broken inside
It’s tearing me apart
I’m so fake
I lie all the time
My whole life is nothing but lies
It’s who I am
I don’t want to be like this
But I am
The stuff I say
I don’t do
The stuff I do
Is stupid
I have no real talent
I am a nobody
A little liar is what I am
An idiot who is unliked
This face I show isn’t me
It’s who I pretend to be
I can’t be me
I just can’t
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PRoachFan
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2005-03-27 11:29:00]
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Re: Bashing Myself
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 11:35:49 AM AEST
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This face I show isn’t me
It’s who I pretend to be
pretty good...okays on forum, overall not bad..
Auryn
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Re: Bashing Myself
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by light on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 11:44:07 AM AEST
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| A very negative quote indeed but also a very deep, open and well written poem. I know the situation all too well myself. Howeva its these cloudy and (d)ark times that allow us to summon inspiration and GREAT strength therefore we grow wiser, more powerful and evolve into a better person. |
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Re: Bashing Myself
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by xrockstheheart on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 12:14:17 PM AEST
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| Maybe we need a new catagory for dysfunctional writers. |
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Re: Bashing Myself
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by reaven2004 on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 05:09:42 PM AEST
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| you say you have no real talent... but you do....you wrie poetry and that is a talent i always thought that i didnt have any talent but then i realized i am pretty good at a few things so dont beat yourself up or put your self down you can write that poem was touching. |
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Re: Bashing Myself
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by NightOwl on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 06:41:23 PM AEST
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I have no real talent
I am a nobody
Well I sure wouldn't say that because you have a great talent- writing poetry! And I'm sure that's not your only one. So keep at it and don't stop writing...
Someone I love who I lost once told me, "Even if it hurts you, it makes you stronger." Don't give up!
Awesome poetry! I can totally relate to it.
*~Erin~* |
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