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Hidden Feelings
Contributed by
PRoachFan
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Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 11:24:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I see her everyday
I think she’s beautiful
If only I could tell her that
She is across from me now
I can’t help but look at her
Its like beauty is just pouring off of her
And filling the room
But she doesn’t know how I feel
She is across the room from me
And I still can’t help but look at her
She is just so beautiful
And I am just so not
How do I tell her?
She is sitting next to me
What do I say to her?
Do u tell her I think she is beautiful
I want to
But I sit there and do nothing
My arm is around her now
But my feelings are still kept in the dark
She is so warm and I am just so cold
Should I tell her now or do I wait till I know her
She won’t know my feelings
I have been hurt because of them before
Therefore I keep them in the dark
Hidden from her view so they can’t get in the way
They try to come out they’re struggling wildly trying to break free
And come into the light
I am forced to struggle with them and push them back into the dark
They should stay there for a while
At least until they get restless again
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PRoachFan
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Re: Hidden Feelings
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by DesolantDreamer on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 12:03:59 PM AEST
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This is a very beautiful poem. This girl is very lucky to have your eye. But you should tell her your feelings, Trust me. They do more damage pent up then out in the open.
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Re: Hidden Feelings
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by NightOwl on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 06:44:04 PM AEST
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I can relate to that, and I have been in that situation... I feel like I never will love anyone again after being hurt, so I am probably not the best to give advice. But heck, even if you know you may crash and burn, let this girl know! She deserves to know, at the very least, and you deserve someone to love. Everyone does...
Awesome poetry! Keep writing!
*~Erin~*
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