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Buried Alive
Contributed by
pixie
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Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 10:16:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I have been buried alive down in this hole,
I know that the darkness has taken my soul,
Nobody knows I am trapped down here,
Alone to die & alone with my fear.
I never imagined I’d die all alone,
The chill of loneliness is felt in my bones,
The tears I cry are slowly drowning me,
In the distance I hear demons laughing with glee.
I always wanted to meet death in my sleep,
But now I can’t so alone I will weep,
Death is coming to me & it’s coming soon,
The shadow of heartache will seal my doom.
I count the moments that I’ve got left,
Waiting for the devil to steal my breath,
All the regrets swimming around in my head,
When I was younger I wished I was dead.
But now that death is coming so close,
This is something I used to wish for the most,
But not anymore now I am scared,
But it is too late as death is already there.
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pixie
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Re: Buried Alive
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by emystar on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 10:28:23 AM AEST
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As long as there's brethe in the body there's hope.
Send the demons back to hell from whence they came in Jesus name, amen!
Don't give up, my friend cause I beleive in miracles. I'm a walking miracle as bout a month ago I flat lined in the ambulence from an anxiety attack but the ambulence attendent brought me back. Also the driver as it is a Christian ambulence service and I know without a doubt that prayer changes things. I didn't know at the time that it was a christian servive.
Hang tuff my friend 'cause this ;place jus wouldn't be the same without u.
luv, huggs, prayer, faith, joy, peace,
emy |
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Re: Buried Alive
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 10:32:38 AM AEST
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*hugs Krissie*
I can understand this, hun.
I know it.
Great write..
Phil |
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Re: Buried Alive
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by smiley_jennyxoxo on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 10:40:06 AM AEST
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| that's a great poem. It's so sad. I feel the same way sometimes. I don't like being alone either. It seems like the pain from not having someone to comfort you can kill you from the inside out. I totally understand. Jenny |
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Re: Buried Alive
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 11:55:37 AM AEST
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This is such a painful write, Pix... Hope all is well...
Hugs and love,
Jenni |
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Re: Buried Alive
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 04:16:13 PM AEST
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the inevitable so hard 2 exscape beautiful and a vital peice of writting . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Buried Alive
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 06:35:44 PM AEST
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Written with a lot of feeling I loved this as well
as the imagery. I think the 2nd stanza was my
favourite that part with "the chill of loneliness"
really got to me for some reason. Yeah this
was good stuff I hope whatever was afflicting
you was cast out after writing this.
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Re: Buried Alive
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by NightOwl on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 06:50:10 PM AEST
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The poem is amazing, and evokes so much emotion! It is veryyyyy well-written and so dark... I love it! It's terrible that so many people, including myself, can relate to it, but we understand what you are going through! Don't give up! Many are alone and scared too, and so hurt, but we will all make it through. Keep going!
Excellent write!
*~Erin~* |
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Re: Buried Alive
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by blue_angel on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 11:03:40 PM AEST
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amazing writing... and although it's very true and i also share these terrible feelings you've got to know you're not alone... no matter how alone you feel there's always someone, even if it is only one person, who deeply cares about you. and to that one person you may mean the entire world. keep hope alive... many hugs and much love,
jennie* |
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Re: Buried Alive
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 09:17:52 AM AEST
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An emotional write, i understand what you meant Krissie.
Jane |
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Re: Buried Alive
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by Stellar on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 10:09:32 PM AEST
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You are by far one of the best writers on this site. Hope things start looking up for you soon.
Take care ~Stellar |
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Re: Buried Alive
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by GurlyTye on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 06:08:57 PM AEST
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| this is sad. |
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