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premier coup d'œil
Contributed by
karmel
on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 06:58:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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we exchanged glances
will our looks lead to something?
whatever the chances
we exchanged glances
scanned the expanses
of the room heard blue globes sing
we exchanged glances
will our looks lead to something?
Copyright ©
karmel
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2005-03-27 06:58:46] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: premier coup d'œil
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kie on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 05:29:29 PM AEST (User
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Eye contact can be such an intense moment or moments. It is electrifying.
I wonder what it would be like if those looks did lead to something.
Gives me something to ponder about.
An enjoyable poem.
Kie |
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Re: premier coup d'œil
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 06:47:20 PM AEST (User
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Liked this poem and its idea. The rythmn was spot on too. Christopher. |
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