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Untitled
Contributed by
MoonfeverMuse
on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 05:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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And my day is all encompassing
My thoughts are all composing
Notes, but the beat is too erratic
And life is all the more dramatic
I'm trying to meet the pace I set
But sometimes I tend to forget
That melody is only motivated
To do things already demonstrated
By the symphony's conductor
I'm my own life's instructor
And I've yet to set a beat
That I have an ear for
I'm motivated to write the score
But not play it and I defeat
Myself
My life is filled with the fantastic
But my actions are melodramatic
Filled with wonder and what might be
Looking too far ahead, I cannot see
What is staring right back at me
And, blind, I run aground
I'm stopped dead by the sound
By ideals only imagined and they resound
Around my head
Within myself
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MoonfeverMuse
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2002-12-19 17:40:00]
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Re: Untitled
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by Snugglebear on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 01:13:49 AM AEST
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| It all made sense to me...it was wonderfully written and it rymed so well yet all came together in the end...you have a great talent...keep them coming...i'll be looking for more |
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Re: Untitled
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by OreO on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 11:04:54 AM AEST
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One day the beat to your life will be set and you will look back and wonder when and where it got set lol...this is a good poem i enjoyed it alot....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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